A PLACE TO PAUSE......TO PONDER.......AND TO PLAY.
wisdom in brevity
Oooooooh, wonderful haiku, powerful message. One feels the shriveling spirit under the caustic biting words.....so well done. I forgot it was Thursday, had better get to making some lemonade:)
So much in seventeen syllables, Lynette, and the picture is perfect. (Nothing sadder than a book abandoned outside.)-- KKay, Alberta, CanadaAn Unfittie's Guide to Adventurous Travel
Ouch - wicked poem.
Lynette,I felt a chill from your words...The very word 'bitter', seems to carry the message.Best wishes, EileenPS: Thank you for your very kind comments regarding the Poets Life Interview.
Wow, your words permeate my brain. Reminds me of harsh words, that I wish I could forget...Bitter pill to swallow~ Well Done, I loved it~
Perfect expression of outburst.. Loved that take :)
Excellent haiku!Mad Kane
http://rinklyrimes.blogspot.com/2011/02/suck-it-and-see.htmlThe answer's a lemon!
So powerful haiku...
Few words heavy message
I have known a few people like thatin my life. Well said.Pamela
True words---sarcastic words sure eat the soul.Well written
I like this one. It's short and i like the way you've compared a lemon to harsh words. Indeed a combo of sour caustic and bitter.
Lovely writing. :-)
Powerful.
Post a Comment
16 comments:
wisdom in brevity
Oooooooh, wonderful haiku, powerful message. One feels the shriveling spirit under the caustic biting words.....so well done. I forgot it was Thursday, had better get to making some lemonade:)
So much in seventeen syllables, Lynette, and the picture is perfect. (Nothing sadder than a book abandoned outside.)
-- K
Kay, Alberta, Canada
An Unfittie's Guide to Adventurous Travel
Ouch - wicked poem.
Lynette,
I felt a chill from your words...
The very word 'bitter', seems to carry the message.
Best wishes, Eileen
PS: Thank you for your very kind comments regarding the Poets Life Interview.
Wow, your words permeate my brain. Reminds me of harsh words, that I wish I could forget...
Bitter pill to swallow~ Well Done, I loved it~
Perfect expression of outburst.. Loved that take :)
Excellent haiku!
Mad Kane
http://rinklyrimes.blogspot.com/2011/02/suck-it-and-see.html
The answer's a lemon!
So powerful haiku...
Few words heavy message
I have known a few people like that
in my life. Well said.
Pamela
True words---sarcastic words sure eat the soul.Well written
I like this one. It's short and i like the way you've compared a lemon to harsh words. Indeed a combo of sour caustic and bitter.
Lovely writing. :-)
Powerful.
Post a Comment