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Thursday, August 26, 2010

A Water Haiku

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Like the waters of
a stream, your love rubs smooth the
edges of my life...
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I'm linking this post to the Thursday Think Tank Prompt at Poets United. For more poetry, please check out their link...
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27 comments:

  1. Sherry Blue SkyAugust 26, 2010 at 8:58 AM

    Another GLORIOUSLY BEAUTIFUL photo and haiku. Wow!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE this one so much!!!!!! Beautiful, Lynette!

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  2. Herb AlyètteAugust 26, 2010 at 9:36 AM

    Made me smile, for real.

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  3. ClaudiaAugust 26, 2010 at 10:13 AM

    this is really lovely - being rubbed smooth by love - sounds fantastic..

    my water-post is up as well

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  4. OliveAugust 26, 2010 at 10:51 AM

    Haiku by you is lovely. I on the other hand could never do it. I am far too wordy. Have a great weekend. hugs♥olive

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  5. SusannahAugust 26, 2010 at 12:38 PM

    Lovely! :-)

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  6. DeborahAugust 26, 2010 at 12:48 PM

    Beautiful! :o)

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  7. AnonymousAugust 26, 2010 at 1:19 PM

    very deep, very lovely. great poem! thanks for sharing!

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  8. MaryAugust 26, 2010 at 2:38 PM

    Beautiful haiku!

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  9. ninotazizAugust 26, 2010 at 3:06 PM

    Beautiful on so many levels...

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  10. flaubertAugust 26, 2010 at 3:17 PM

    Very pretty haiku! And I love your blog!
    Pamela

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  11. EG CameraGirlAugust 26, 2010 at 5:01 PM

    Lovely haiku with a moving sentiment.

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  12. Eileen T O'Neill .....August 26, 2010 at 5:41 PM

    Lynette,
    I loved the image and those words. Felt as though I could hear the water gently lapping.
    Excellent!

    Eileen

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  13. The Square CornerAugust 26, 2010 at 5:58 PM

    So simple and beautiful. A true Haiku.

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  14. Diane TAugust 26, 2010 at 6:47 PM

    I love your haiku and the photo that goes with it. Beautiful blog!

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  15. Colleen - the AmAzINg Mrs. BAugust 26, 2010 at 7:49 PM

    lovely..it paints a picture in my mind...

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  16. Gemma Wiseman aka Pamela AdamsAugust 27, 2010 at 4:51 AM

    Delightful melting of Nature's beauty and the wonder of love's healing!

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  17. AnonymousAugust 27, 2010 at 5:47 AM

    beautiful short and sweet thought=)

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  18. rchAugust 27, 2010 at 6:49 AM

    My defenses quickly eroded after reading this one, very lovely.

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  19. WeaselAugust 27, 2010 at 9:09 AM

    Wonderful haiku! =)

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  20. AnonymousAugust 27, 2010 at 2:24 PM

    A lovely haiku.

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  21. signed...bkmAugust 27, 2010 at 4:11 PM

    Nice write... blessings...bkm

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  22. JinksyAugust 27, 2010 at 11:07 PM

    Enjoyed both haiku and photo whose colours ranged from light to dark.

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  23. EllaAugust 28, 2010 at 10:31 AM

    I love this; so beautiful~ You photo is gorgeous, too~

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  24. DasuntouchaAugust 28, 2010 at 5:28 PM

    Pleasurable brevity indeed.

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  25. Serving Hugs on a Platter and Tears in a TeacupAugust 28, 2010 at 6:20 PM

    I love this....

    love rubs smooth the edges of my life...

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  26. AnonymousAugust 29, 2010 at 3:20 PM

    Rocks smoothed over time and love that smoothes the edges of a life...Absolutely wonderful, presentation and poem.

    Elizabeth

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  27. Philip ThriftAugust 30, 2010 at 10:16 AM

    A great haiku. Love it!

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