Thursday, August 26, 2010

A Water Haiku

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Like the waters of
a stream, your love rubs smooth the
edges of my life...
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I'm linking this post to the Thursday Think Tank Prompt at Poets United. For more poetry, please check out their link...
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27 comments:

Sherry Blue Sky said...

Another GLORIOUSLY BEAUTIFUL photo and haiku. Wow!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE this one so much!!!!!! Beautiful, Lynette!

Herb Alyètte said...

Made me smile, for real.

Claudia said...

this is really lovely - being rubbed smooth by love - sounds fantastic..

my water-post is up as well

Olive Cooper said...

Haiku by you is lovely. I on the other hand could never do it. I am far too wordy. Have a great weekend. hugs♥olive

Susannah said...

Lovely! :-)

Deborah said...

Beautiful! :o)

lifeloveandmisery said...

very deep, very lovely. great poem! thanks for sharing!

Mary said...

Beautiful haiku!

ninotaziz said...

Beautiful on so many levels...

flaubert said...

Very pretty haiku! And I love your blog!
Pamela

EG Wow said...

Lovely haiku with a moving sentiment.

Eileen T O'Neill ..... said...

Lynette,
I loved the image and those words. Felt as though I could hear the water gently lapping.
Excellent!

Eileen

The Square Corner said...

So simple and beautiful. A true Haiku.

Diane T said...

I love your haiku and the photo that goes with it. Beautiful blog!

Colleen - the AmAzINg Mrs. B said...

lovely..it paints a picture in my mind...

Greyscale Territory said...

Delightful melting of Nature's beauty and the wonder of love's healing!

riikainfinityy.com said...

beautiful short and sweet thought=)

rch said...

My defenses quickly eroded after reading this one, very lovely.

Systematic Weasel said...

Wonderful haiku! =)

paulandrewrussell said...

A lovely haiku.

signed...bkm said...

Nice write... blessings...bkm

Jinksy said...

Enjoyed both haiku and photo whose colours ranged from light to dark.

Ellie said...

I love this; so beautiful~ You photo is gorgeous, too~

Dasuntoucha said...

Pleasurable brevity indeed.

Serving Hugs on a Platter and Tears in a Teacup said...

I love this....

love rubs smooth the edges of my life...

1sojournal said...

Rocks smoothed over time and love that smoothes the edges of a life...Absolutely wonderful, presentation and poem.

Elizabeth

Philip Thrift said...

A great haiku. Love it!